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->''[[https://www.egscomics.com/?date=2008-07-07 "This change of heart]] [[HatesBeingTouched does not include a desire to be touched."]]''
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* ActionGirl: Not as much so as, say, Grace or Nanase, but Susan's the only member of the main cast who's at all proficient with a weapon, and [[spoiler: she actually ends up being the deciding factor in the abomination fight during her and Nanase's trips to France.]]
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* AttractiveBentGender: [[EvenTheGuysWantHim A rare male case]].
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* DudeMagnet: Despite her aloofness / later social awkwardness, a lot of guys are attracted to her, e. g. Elliot, Tom, Matt and, when she's transformed into a male, Justin. Then there are the occasional [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer female admirers]].
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* DudeMagnet: Despite her aloofness / and later social awkwardness, a lot of guys are attracted to her, e. e.g. Elliot, Tom, Matt and, when she's transformed into a male, Justin. Then there are the occasional [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer female admirers]].
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--> '''Hanma:''' Seriously, what is it with people and Susan?
--> '''Liz:''' I'm hoping to get to know her [[ExperimentedInCollege in college]].
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: With [[spoiler: Elliot]]. Not only do each of the main characters have at least some inkling of it, but [[spoiler: the [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2013-04-23 in-universe fandom for their movie review show ships them.]]]]
--> '''Liz:''' I'm hoping to get to know her [[ExperimentedInCollege in college]].
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: With [[spoiler: Elliot]]. Not only do each of the main characters have at least some inkling of it, but [[spoiler: the [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2013-04-23 in-universe fandom for their movie review show ships them.]]]]
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'''Liz:''' I'm hoping to get to know her [[ExperimentedInCollege in college]].
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: With [[spoiler: Elliot]]. Not only do each of the main characters have at least some inkling of it, but
* HairColorAngst: Susan was born a natural blonde but started dyeing it blue-black after she caught her father cheating on her mother with a blonde woman. Since {{downplayed|Trope}} because, while she worked through some of her feelings about her dad's cheating, the blue-black hair has become more part of her identity (especially since her Awakening caused the dye to magically bond to her hair [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2017-12-08 unless she uses the magic stored in it to boost her abilities]]).
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* IronicName: "Tiffany Pompoms" really doesn't fit her. Which is why she goes by "Susan".
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* IronicName: "Tiffany Pompoms" really doesn't fit her. Which her, which is why she goes by "Susan".
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* LoveRevelationEpiphany: When [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/tlod-025 Lucy reveals that she is in love with her]], Diane [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/tlod-029 realizes that she has the romance she always wanted with Lucy]].
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* ShipTease: In "Squirrel Prophet" he was [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=1899 spending time with]] Luke. Of course, Grace is the [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=1894 first to see the potential]].
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* TheWorfEffect: Her guardian form spell is [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2013-06-20 supposed to be so impressive]] that it requires [[NecessaryDrawback sacrifice]] and can only be cast by people with both rare talent (possibly only by people the other side would call royalty) and selflessnes, and yet it is [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2013-07-26 no match for Not-Tengu].
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Nanase, Always Someone Better: It's not a Moment Of Weakness, Tedd says it to make Sarah feel better
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: To Tedd, who admits in a moment of weakness during the ''Hair'' arc that he's jealous of her for a variety of reasons (her intelligence, DudeMagnet status, and martial arts skills, among others), but nothing more than the fact that Nanase has [[TheGift incredible raw magical talent]] while Tedd... [[MuggleBornOfMages doesn't]]. There's also tension between her and Sarah for many of the same reasons, with the added caveat that [[LoveTriangle Nanase used to date Elliot]].
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: To Tedd, who admits in a moment of weakness during the ''Hair'' arc that he's jealous of her for a variety of reasons (her intelligence, DudeMagnet status, and martial arts skills, among others), but nothing more than the fact that Nanase has [[TheGift incredible raw magical talent]] while Tedd... [[MuggleBornOfMages doesn't]]. There's also tension between her and Sarah for many of the same reasons, with the added caveat that [[LoveTriangle Nanase used to date Elliot]].
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Grace's Anti Regeneration may not work against vampires as their regeneration is presumably distinct from Damien's; further detail to her Cannot Convey Sarcasm entry; Jestful Statement shows that she has Super Strength by default; updating her Innocently Insensitive entry
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* AntiRegeneration: Her claws in Omega form have a venom that counteracts {{Healing Factor}}s.
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* AntiRegeneration: Her claws in Omega form have a venom that counteracts Damien's {{Healing Factor}}s.Factor}}.
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* CannotConveySarcasm: The combination of her naivety, bubbliness, and DitzyGenius moments sometimes makes it hard for people to tell whether she's being sarcastic or genuinely suggesting something.
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* CannotConveySarcasm: The combination of her naivety, bubbliness, and DitzyGenius moments sometimes makes it hard for people to tell whether she's being sarcastic or genuinely suggesting something. In the storyline "Jestful Statement" she experiments with [[https://www.egscomics.com/egsnp/jestful-03 prefacing what she says with her intended tone]] like the elcor from [[Franchise/MassEffect]] in order to avoid being [[https://www.egscomics.com/egsnp/jestful-01 mistaken]] for being LiteralMinded.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: [[VoluntaryShapeshifting Complete control over her physical form]], [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]], [[FlightStrengthHeart and]] [[SpeaksFluentAnimal talking to animals]]. Some of her combat forms add immunity to fire and SuperStrength to the deal.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: [[VoluntaryShapeshifting Complete control over her physical form]], [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]], SuperStrength [[FlightStrengthHeart and]] [[SpeaksFluentAnimal talking to animals]]. Some of her combat forms add immunity to fire and SuperStrength to the deal.
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** Human furniture isn't made with tails in mind ([[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2012-01-19 see for yourself]]),
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** [[HumanFurnitureIsAPainInTheTail Human furniture isn't made with tails in mind mind]] ([[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2012-01-19 see for yourself]]),
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Accidentally suggests [[spoiler: Sam]], a trans man, is a BeardedLady. Given that the moment was shown in a flashback and she apparently understands what transgender means now, presumably [[spoiler: Sam]] explained the issue to her. [[spoiler: She later realizes how her knowing at all might be causing him stress]].
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Accidentally suggests [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2014-07-15-2 suggests]] [[spoiler: Sam]], a trans man, is a BeardedLady. Given that BeardedLady.She learns about the moment was shown in a flashback and she apparently understands what transgender means now, presumably issue after [[spoiler: Sam]] explained the issue [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/tsos-01 tells her to her.look it up]]. [[spoiler: She later realizes how her knowing at all might be causing him stress]].
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Sarah: The catgirl incident is described in too much detail to count as a Noodle Incident
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** Sometime before the comic started, Tedd turned Sarah into a CatGirl as a joke... and couldn't turn her back, forcing her to miss school until the transformation naturally wore off. Despite being a large part of Sarah's initial animosity towards Tedd, that event has never been shown on panel.
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Sarah, Coming Out Story: She doesn't actually come out to anyone, and since she ends up in denial, it's not even an LGBT Awakening; Covert Pervert: Weblinks Are Not Examples
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* ComingOutStory: The [=NP=] arc "[=MV5=]" is this for Sarah. Although there have been hints in previous storylines that she's less than completely straight (see under AmbiguouslyBi), this one sees her develop a strong [[StupidSexyFriend attraction]] to both [[InnocentFanserviceGirl Grace]] and [[TheTease Ellen]].
* CovertPervert: [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2003-04-15 She is almost]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2006-01-09 as bad as]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2006-06-05 Tedd himself]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2011-01-05 on]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=1805 occasion]].
** Look at where Sarah imagines staring [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2014-04-24 here]].
* CovertPervert: [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2003-04-15 She is almost]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2006-01-09 as bad as]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2006-06-05 Tedd himself]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2011-01-05 on]] [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=1805 occasion]].
** Look at where Sarah imagines staring [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2014-04-24 here]].
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Tedd, Trans Tribulations: They aren't considering transforming to a masculine form just before Diane arrives, that's earlier
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** When Diane comes to visit, Tedd (in female form) is worried about what she might think. They even think about swapping to male form before Diane arrives and the doorbell cuts off their train of thought.
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** When Diane comes to visit, Tedd (in female form) is worried about what she might think. They even [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/party-074 think about swapping to male form form]] before Diane arrives and the doorbell cuts off their train of thought.[[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/party-075 Elliot comforts them]]. Even after that, Tedd is still nervous.
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* {{Seers}}: [[spoiler:Voltaire describes them as a Seer, and is apparently important enough as one that Voltaire's plan to kill Elliot was simply to traumatize him with the loss of their best friend]].
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* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler:Tedd may be skirting TheDarkSide pretty close. They [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2004-08-24 had a dream]] with himself as Lord Tedd duking it out with some nebulous monstrosity, and now they [[http://www.egscomics.com/?date=2011-10-07 built]] a gauntlet just like Lord Tedd's. This comes at the end of an arc called 'One Way Road', after Tedd has declared that he's going to balance science and friendships and demonstrated rather militant devotion to this, especially in narration]].
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Tedd: I've found a trope that fits better than Dumb Struck; link to source; My Significance Sense Is Tingling: All examples I can think of involve both Grace and Sarah
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* DumbStruck: When Tedd was younger and trumatized by their mother abandoning them, they were so withdrawn that Nanase thought they were mute].
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Via RuleOfFunny, Tedd has the ability to sense whenever girls he knows have moments of sexy awesomeness or nearly have that kind of moment.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Via RuleOfFunny, Tedd has the ability to sense whenever girls he knows Grace and Sarah have moments of sexy awesomeness or nearly have that kind of moment.
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* SilenceOfSadness: When Tedd was younger and traumatized by their mother abandoning them, they were [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/2013-08-27 so withdrawn that Nanase thought they were mute]].
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* DumbStruck: When Tedd was younger and trumatized by their mother abandoning them, they were so withdrawn that Nanase thought they were mute].
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Tedd, Famed In Story: In Raven's case it has nothing to do with Tedd's fame as he knows Edward and Noriko personally, and cares for Tedd's happiness out of guilt over Noriko abandoning Tedd
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** The magical community, at least, is surprisingly aware of Tedd. Jerry could identify them just from Susan's brief description, and the mention of them was enough to [[spoiler:make Raven freak out and rethink his entire plan to capture the boar]]. They claim it's only because he's the son of BigGood Mr. Verres, though this doesn't come across as completely convincing. [[spoiler:It's implied strongly it's because of their mother's status, not their father's. Jerry noticeably pauses before claiming Mr. Verres as the reason. Their dad also is very clearly hiding any info about their mother from him, even demanding Nanase not tell Tedd the reason Not-Tengu attacked her was because she's Noriko's niece, saying to claim it was because she's related to him instead]].
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** The magical community, at least, is surprisingly aware of Tedd. Jerry could identify them just from Susan's brief description, and the mention of them was enough to [[spoiler:make Raven freak out and rethink his entire plan to capture the boar]]. They claim description. He claims it's only because he's the son of BigGood Mr. Verres, though this doesn't come across as completely convincing. [[spoiler:It's implied strongly it's because of their mother's status, not their father's. Jerry noticeably pauses before claiming Mr. Verres as the reason. Their dad also is very clearly hiding any info about their mother from him, even demanding Nanase not tell Tedd the reason Not-Tengu attacked her was because she's Noriko's niece, saying to claim it was because she's related to him instead]].
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Tedd, Closest Thing We Got: Arthur is a seer too; Curtains Match The Windows: General clarification on work content
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* ClosestThingWeGot: [[spoiler:Arthur offers him a lab and funding to help research and develop magic in order to make it safer for people to use. Arthur admits he doesn't really want to use Tedd, but he needs a scientist who is a seer, and their only other choice is a foreign child]].
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* ClosestThingWeGot: [[spoiler:Arthur offers him a lab and funding to help research and develop magic in order to make it safer for people to use. Arthur admits he doesn't really want to use Tedd, but he needs a scientist who is a seer, and their only other choice choices are Arthur himself, who is not a scientist and wants to retire, and Van, a foreign child]].
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindows: Seen in [[http://www.egscomics.com/sketchbook.php?id=720 this]] colored panel. {{Lampshaded}} in the commentaries.
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindows: Seen Purple hair and purple eyes, as seen in [[http://www.egscomics.com/sketchbook.php?id=720 this]] colored panel. {{Lampshaded}} panel and {{lampshaded}} in the commentaries.its commentary.
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Tedd, A Cup Angst: I read Lavender as saying that her curvy look isn't natural, but Tedd isn't sure either way.
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* ACupAngst: They're left feeling [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/layers-033 a little inadequate]] with their default female form after meeting Lavender and learning that her ImpossibleHourglassFigure is all natural. The next page shows them hanging out in a much curvier form than usual.
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* ACupAngst: They're left feeling [[https://www.egscomics.com/comic/layers-033 a little inadequate]] with their default female form after meeting Lavender and learning not being sure that her ImpossibleHourglassFigure is isn't all natural. The next page shows them hanging out in a much curvier form than usual.
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* LineOfSightName: His "party girl" form gets the name Heidi because it was the closest thing Melissa could think of to "hide".
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* IncompatibleOrientation: With Justin. Possibly subverted with Elliot's [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=2348 recent]][[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=2349 revelations]] concerning both gender identity and sexuality.
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* IncompatibleOrientation: With Justin. Possibly subverted with Elliot's [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=2348 recent]][[http://www.later]][[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=2349 revelations]] concerning both gender identity and sexuality.
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** Recently with Jay, after meeting her at a card tournament Susan wanted a chance to talk to her more without having to worry about the tournament and realized to her horror she was describing a date.
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** Recently with Jay, after After meeting her Jay at a card tournament tournament, Susan wanted a chance to talk to her more without having to worry about the tournament and realized to her horror she was describing a date.