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* DiscOneFinalBoss: It is the final obstacle that Kril has to face before Firth decides to hijack the Perfect Whorl for himself, thus leading to the actual final boss thereafter.
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* PreFinalBoss: It is the final obstacle that Kril has to face before Firth decides to hijack the Perfect Whorl for himself, thus leading to the actual final boss thereafter.
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* FinalBoss: After defeating Praya Dubia, [[spoiler:Firth claims the Perfect Whorl and challenges Kril to a two-phase final duel.]]
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* StrawmanPolitical: He's based on the "temporarily embarrassed millionaire" or "crypto-bro" stereotype of capitalism supporters, idolizing Roland (a billionaire tycoon) and investing heavily in "alternative" solutions that ultimately benefit himself.
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* OminousObsidianOoze: Its primary means of attack, on a very ocean-wide scale in fact. It produces a black sludge-like substance, Gunk, which strips anyone affected of their humanity, turning them into savage killers.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: He is a super powerful, purple colored moon snail. His shells littered around the game also serve as its save points.
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* PowerStereotypeFlip: Of [[spoiler: humanoid Soulsborne {{Final Boss}}es. Normally, when the final enemy is some kind of EvilCounterpart or MirrorBoss to the player, they're portrayed as either some kind of tragic FallenHero, a WorthyOpponent who wants one final duel, or a HumanoidAbomination of some variety. Firth on the other hand is none of those, being a selfish opportunist who's solely out to better his own interests who only has the power he does through exploiting the work of others. Instead of his motivations being sympathetic or too alien to understand, he has the plain and infuriatingly simple motivation of just being a greedy asshole who doesn't care for anyone but himself.]]
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* ShownTheirWork: Praya Dubia is made up of a conglomerate of souls, which reflects how the real-life ''Praya dubia'' is a colonial animal consisting of many polyps that operate as a single organism.
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* BigBadWannabe: Roland is initially built up as being the game's main antagonist, being an incredibly greedy business tycoon that was a significant reason for Flotsam Vale's current state, being on the most heavily polluted areas in the game. He also competes with the main characters towards finding the treasure in the Mouth of the Drain, which Kril wanted to get in order to pay the Loan Shark to get his shell back. Towards the end of the game, however, he is [[spoiler:killed off by his own minion Inkerton, whom Kril must fight before he reaches the final area of the game.]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Roland is initially built up as being the game's main antagonist, being an incredibly greedy business tycoon that was a significant reason for Flotsam Vale's current state, being on the most heavily polluted areas in the game. He also competes with the main characters towards finding the treasure in the Mouth of the Drain, which Kril wanted to get in order to pay the Loan Shark to get his shell back. Towards the end of the game, however, he is [[spoiler:killed off by his own minion Inkerton, Inkerton affected by the Gunk, whom Kril must fight before he reaches the final area of the game.]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Roland is initially built up as being the game's main antagonist, being an incredibly greedy business tycoon that was a significant reason for Flotsam Vale's current state, being on the most heavily polluted areas in the game. He also competes with the main characters towards finding the Perfect Whorl, which Kril wanted to get in order to pay the Loan Shark to get his shell back. Towards the end of the game, however, he is [[spoiler:killed off by his own minion Inkerton, whom Kril must fight before he reaches the final area of the game.]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Roland is initially built up as being the game's main antagonist, being an incredibly greedy business tycoon that was a significant reason for Flotsam Vale's current state, being on the most heavily polluted areas in the game. He also competes with the main characters towards finding the Perfect Whorl, treasure in the Mouth of the Drain, which Kril wanted to get in order to pay the Loan Shark to get his shell back. Towards the end of the game, however, he is [[spoiler:killed off by his own minion Inkerton, whom Kril must fight before he reaches the final area of the game.]]
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* EtTuBrute: She is the first to call Kril out when he admits that he doesn't intend to share the treasure with the others, but wants to use it to buy his shell back. She then chews him out even worse when he says he just wants his life to go back to "normal", when it hasn't been normal for the others from the start.
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* EtTuBrute: WhatTheHellHero: She is the first to call Kril out when he admits that he doesn't intend to share the treasure with the others, but wants to use it to buy his shell back. She then chews him out even worse when he says he just wants his life to go back to "normal", when it hasn't been normal for the others from the start.
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An Alaskan king crab, who is former king of the old Carcinia, whose negligence lead to its eventual downfall.
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An Alaskan king crab, who is the former king of the old Carcinia, whose negligence lead to its eventual downfall.
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* StrugglingSingleMother: Is raising two daughters alone while also running her bar, and embarks on her journey to find the treasure to maybe give her children a better life.
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*EtTuBrute: She is the first to call Kril out when he admits that he doesn't intend to share the treasure with the others, but wants to use it to buy his shell back. She then chews him out even worse when he says he just wants his life to go back to "normal", when it hasn't been normal for the others from the start.
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A humble, well-meaning hermit crab who is evicted from his shell after being unable to pay for it. He goes on a long quest just to get it back.
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A humble, well-meaning hermit crab who is evicted from his shell after being unable to pay for it.his taxes. He goes on a long quest just to get it back.
* KillTheCreditor: [[spoiler:Which is what happens to him after he tries to back out of his deal with Kril.]]
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The last remaining guard of Duchess Magista after a mysterious force seems to overtake the entirety of her castle, who swore to defeat whatever caused it.
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A wise old magical Moon Snail
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A wise old magical Moon SnailSnail.
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* FlashStep: His MegatonPunch will sometimes combo into this, with a DragonballZ-esque sound effect.
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A tyrannical queen who replaced all of the ocean's currency with microplastics.
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A tyrannical queen Dungeness crab who replaced all of is taxing the ocean's currency with microplastics.reef's populace to build her castle.
*StealthPun: Her title of Duchess is remarkably close to the name of her species as a Dungeness crab.
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A greedy business tycoon isopod who intends to retrive the Perfect Whorl for himself.
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A greedy business tycoon isopod who intends to retrive retrieve the Perfect Whorl treasure at the Mouth of the Drain for himself.
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The "right-claw" of Roland.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: He tries to put on a generous SouthernGentleman facade, but it's very clearly just a cover for his own greed.
* NonIndicativeName: He has the BossSubtitles of Venture [[{{Pun}} Crabitalist]], but he's an isopod.
* NonIndicativeName: He has the BossSubtitles of Venture [[{{Pun}} Crabitalist]], but he's an isopod.
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* MeaningfulName: One letter off from "Pinkerton," the infamous detective agency known for its violent enforcement of capitalist policies.
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* MeaningfulName: One letter off from "Pinkerton," the infamous detective agency known for its violent enforcement of capitalist policies. Doubles as a PunnyName considering he's a squid.
* ShoutOut: Functions as a massive one to ''VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}}'', with him using a crab cracker and a pistol at the same time in the same way a Hunter uses a trick weapon and sidearm, complete with him being able to toss the pistol aside to extend the range of the cracker. His tricorn-like mantle and [[BossSubtitles Boss Subtitle]] of Crab ''Hunter'' only make it more obvious.
* ShoutOut: Functions as a massive one to ''VideoGame/{{Bloodborne}}'', with him using a crab cracker and a pistol at the same time in the same way a Hunter uses a trick weapon and sidearm, complete with him being able to toss the pistol aside to extend the range of the cracker. His tricorn-like mantle and [[BossSubtitles Boss Subtitle]] of Crab ''Hunter'' only make it more obvious.
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* DastardlyWhiplash: He's one in isopod form, complete with curly mustache and top hat.
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* ScaryTeeth: In the first phase of his boss fight Camtscha's face is covered in barnacles, but when he molts from his old shell he spares no time inserting a set of dentures into his mandibles, giving his already uncomfortably fleshy appearance a horrifically human-looking set of chompers. He even uses them to chew you to death should he kill you with his grab.
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* Really700YearsOld: While Konche is clearly an old-timer, he later reveals that [[spoiler:he was a refugee of the destruction of the Old Ocean 30 years ago. That may not seem old to you and me, but it alarms Kril, which makes sense when you consider that real-life hermit crabs live up to be about 15 years old. That would make Konche positively ancient.]]
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* Really700YearsOld: While Konche is clearly an old-timer, he later reveals that [[spoiler:he was a refugee of the destruction of the Old Ocean 30 years ago. That may not seem old to you and me, but it alarms Kril, which makes sense when you consider that real-life hermit crabs live up to be about 15 years old. That would make Konche positively ancient.]]
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* PaperThinDisguise: The Loan Shark is obviously not a real shark, but a grabber toy wearing a cowboy hat. It seems to fool Kril just fine though, who never comments on them being the same person.
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* ButHeSoundsHandsome: When Kril catches up to Prawnathan and confronts him about the shark that stole his shell, Prawnathan claims that "that shark seemed super cool and chill" to him.
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* Really700YearsOld: While Konche is clearly an old-timer, he later reveals that [[spoiler:he was a refugee of the destruction of the Old Ocean 30 years ago. That may not seem old to you and me, but it alarms Kril, which makes sense when you consider that real-life hermit crabs live up to be about 15 years old. That which would make Konche positively ancient.]]
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* Really700YearsOld: While Konche is clearly an old-timer, he later reveals that [[spoiler:he was a refugee of the destruction of the Old Ocean 30 years ago. That may not seem old to you and me, but it alarms Kril, which makes sense when you consider that real-life hermit crabs live up to be about 15 years old. That which would make Konche positively ancient.]]
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* Really700YearsOld: While Konche is clearly an old-timer, he later reveals that [[spoiler:he was a refugee of the destruction of the Old Ocean 30 years ago. That may not seem old to you and me, but it alarms Kril, which makes sense when you consider that real-life hermit crabs live up to be about 15 years old. That which would make Konche positively ancient.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler:Firth's refusal to listen to his pleas to save Chitan and his rambling about spreading more trash about the ocean finally cause Kril to snap and admit he's been holding back all his rage and frustration since he arrived in the ocean, and now he's going to cut loose on Firth so he can take the Perfect Whorl for himself]].
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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler: As he becomes exceedingly DrunkOnPower from wearing the Perfect Whorl, he starts gaining delusions of godhood and outright declares himself a god before he attacks Kril]].
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* TheDrifter: What he becomes by the end of the game. [[spoiler:He gives his own shell up to a homeless hermit crab, and devotes his entire life to helping the other sea life.]]
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* TheDrifter: What he becomes by the end of the game. [[spoiler:He gives his own shell up to a homeless hermit crab, and devotes his entire life to helping the other sea life.life, travelling from place to place.]]
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* TheDrifter: What he becomes by the end of the game. [[spoiler:He gives his own shell up to a homeless hermit crab, and devotes his entire life to helping the other sea life.]]
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* AGodAmI: Calls itself "the ocean's one true god." It's later revealed to be a primordial [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydrozoa hydrozoan]] made up of negative Umami, but its ocean-wide connection to the Gunk means it's far closer to godhood than anything else Kril encounters.
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* AGodAmI: Calls itself "the ocean's one true god." It's later revealed to be a primordial [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydrozoa hydrozoan]] made up of negative Umami, Umami and damned souls of those that died from pollution in the old Carcinia, but its ocean-wide connection to the Gunk means it's far closer to godhood than anything else Kril encounters.
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ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Chitan stabs him through the chest and kills him while possessed by the Praya Dubia]].
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* JerkassHasAPoint: She's aloof, condescending and uncomfortably bloodthirsty, but her militant viewpoint does have merit -- as she says to Kril, if everyone simply tries to avoid and step around the corruption plaguing the ocean, it'll just keep spreading until there's nowhere left to run.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kril starts the game as a timid recluse, but several people around him note his inexplicable and ''concerning'' talent for violence. [[spoiler:He eventually confesses he's been simmering with repressed rage ever since he left his tide pool and saw the awful state of the world, and becomes a full-on ScreamingWarrior against the final antagonists]].
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* OnlySaneMan: Kril is the only character in the entire game that even questions the harmful capitalistic system within its setting.
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* OnlySaneMan: Kril is one of the only character in the entire game few characters that even questions the harmful capitalistic system within its setting.
* MeaningfulName: It's one letter off from "Filth," showing how he revels in the ocean's trash-based ecosystem.
* VerbalTic: Ends most of his sentences with "I say!"
*[[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Woman]]: She has the clearest view of the foul and unsustainable nature of the trash economy, as well as healthy ways to resist it.
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* UncertainDoom: [[spoiler:It's never outright stated she died from the wounds Kril inflicted on her as a result of their fight, but being that and the Perfect Whorl was destroyed before Kril could find and heal her her chances at survival look bleak]].collapse of Trash Island leaves him unable to check on her. Averted in the credits, where she's shown drilling under Grovekeeper Topoda]].
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* HermitGuru: Lives in a secluded grove where he hones his skills.
* PoorCommunicationKills: When Kril finally reaches Topoda's grove, he assumes Kril is another Gunk-possessed monster and attacks on sight. Kril doesn't get a chance to speak and correct the misunderstanding until he fights him off.
* HermitGuru: Lives in a secluded grove where he hones his skills.
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