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A goddess new to managing and training a Familia.
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Goddess of the Home. A goddess new to managing and training a Familia.Familia. A goddess who barely knows how to manage a Familia but willing to do what is necessary for someone she considers one of her members.
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** When he learns the true nature of both the Heartless and Sora, his opinion towards Hestia is that they must do what is necessary so that the World Order of Orario is not compromised.
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* Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass: On the surface he can come off as a Butt-Monkey, but he's secretly one of the most cunning chessmasters in the series, having a hand in driving many of the plots.
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* Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass: CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: On the surface he can come off as a Butt-Monkey, but he's secretly one of the most cunning chessmasters in the series, having a hand in driving many of the plots.
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* TheArchmage: He was once the Sage, creator of the Philosopher's Stone and therefore one of Orario's greatest magicians of all time.
* BlackCloak: Fels' standard form of attire. This helps mask the fact that they are an undead sorcerer.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Fels is first seen in a dark cloak which masks his identity, and his appearance under it is frightening. However, as he's allied with the Guild, he's one of the good guys.
* OurLichesAreDifferent: He was once the Sage who created the Philosopher's Stone, which granted him immortality. However, it turned him into a monster. Underneath his robes, he is actually a skeleton.
* BlackCloak: Fels' standard form of attire. This helps mask the fact that they are an undead sorcerer.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Fels is first seen in a dark cloak which masks his identity, and his appearance under it is frightening. However, as he's allied with the Guild, he's one of the good guys.
* OurLichesAreDifferent: He was once the Sage who created the Philosopher's Stone, which granted him immortality. However, it turned him into a monster. Underneath his robes, he is actually a skeleton.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Fels is first seen in a dark cloak which masks his
* OurLichesAreDifferent: He was once the Sage who created the Philosopher's Stone, which granted him immortality. However, it turned him into a monster. Underneath his robes, he is actually a skeleton.
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* TheArchmage: He was once the Sage, creator of the Philosopher's Stone and therefore one of Orario's greatest magicians of all time.
* BlackCloak: Fels' standard form of attire. This helps mask the fact that they are an undead sorcerer.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Fels is first seen in a dark cloak which masks his identity, and his appearance under it is frightening. However, as he's allied with the Guild, he's one of the good guys.
* OurLichesAreDifferent: He was once the Sage who created the Philosopher's Stone, which granted him immortality. However, it turned him into a monster. Underneath his robes, he is actually a skeleton.
* BlackCloak: Fels' standard form of attire. This helps mask the fact that they are an undead sorcerer.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Fels is first seen in a dark cloak which masks his identity, and his appearance under it is frightening. However, as he's allied with the Guild, he's one of the good guys.
* OurLichesAreDifferent: He was once the Sage who created the Philosopher's Stone, which granted him immortality. However, it turned him into a monster. Underneath his robes, he is actually a skeleton.
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Leader of the Adventurers Guild who ensures the safety of the mortal world.
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Leader of the Adventurers Guild who ensures the safety of the mortal world. The first god to descend to Gekai and offer blessings, his prayers are responsible for keeping the Dungeon in check.
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* BigGood: He leads the Guild, which is responsible for keeping order in Orario. However, there is an agreement that the Guild must not become another Familia, and thus Ouranos doesn't seem to have much power. In his own words, he rules, but he does not govern.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: His main priority is to seek the well-being of Orario and he will do what is necessary to ensure the safety of everyone.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: His main priority is to seek the well-being of Orario and he will do what is necessary to ensure the safety of everyone.
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* Crouching Moron, Hidden Badass: On the surface he can come off as a Butt-Monkey, but he's secretly one of the most cunning chessmasters in the series, having a hand in driving many of the plots.
* ExtremeDoormat: To many gods he is a coward with no backbone. However, given he's a Wild Card, this might be an act.
* HandsomeLech: He's a total pervert. Most of the women he meets are exasperated by him and his flirting.
* WalkingtheEarth: He's not in Orario often because he travels a lot, as befits the Olympians' Divine Messenger
* ExtremeDoormat: To many gods he is a coward with no backbone. However, given he's a Wild Card, this might be an act.
* HandsomeLech: He's a total pervert. Most of the women he meets are exasperated by him and his flirting.
* WalkingtheEarth: He's not in Orario often because he travels a lot, as befits the Olympians' Divine Messenger
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* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: As Sora explains after a practice match against Ais, she is used to fighting monsters and not adventurers, which makes her vulnerable against opponents who are CombatPragmatist than her.
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* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: As Sora explains after a practice match against Ais, she is used to fighting monsters and not adventurers, which makes her vulnerable against opponents who are more CombatPragmatist than her.her, so he suggests for her to spar against other members of her Familia.
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* BoxingLessonsforSuperman: As Sora explains after a practice match against Ais, she is used to fighting monsters and not adventurers, which makes her vulnerable against opponents who are CombatPragmatist than her.
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* BoxingLessonsforSuperman: BoxingLessonsForSuperman: As Sora explains after a practice match against Ais, she is used to fighting monsters and not adventurers, which makes her vulnerable against opponents who are CombatPragmatist than her.
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* BoxingLessonsforSuperman: As Sora explains after a practice match against Ais, she is used to fighting monsters and not adventurers, which makes her vulnerable against opponents who are CombatPragmatist than her.
** Using an increased gravity spell, Ais is put on the same level as Bell so she can train on equal terms.
** Using an increased gravity spell, Ais is put on the same level as Bell so she can train on equal terms.
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* TheWorfEffect: Despite being one of the most powerful magic users in Orario, she is baffled by Sora's powerful chantless spells.
** It also applies to Sora who considers Donald to be the most powerful magic user he knows.
** It also applies to Sora who considers Donald to be the most powerful magic user he knows.
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* GreenEyedMonster: She is envious of Welf because she is at a party with Sora, since she believes that a blacksmith with less experience than her managed to obtain exclusive access to materials from an adventurer who has a skill that allows him to easily obtain rare materials that allow creation of powerful magic items.
* Ultimate Blacksmith: The best mortal smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario.
* Ultimate Blacksmith: The best mortal smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario.
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* GreenEyedMonster: She is envious of Welf because she is at a party with Sora, since she believes that a blacksmith with less experience than her managed to obtain exclusive access to materials from an adventurer who has a skill that allows him to easily obtain rare materials that allow creation of powerful magic items.
items though she is aware of him not wanting to forge magic swords.
*Ultimate Blacksmith: UltimateBlacksmith: The best mortal smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario.
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* Ultimate Blacksmith: The best (mortal) smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario. She is the best Orario has to offer and her ultimate goal is to surpass the skills of the gods themselves but she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
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* Ultimate Blacksmith: The best (mortal) mortal smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario. Orario.
** She is the best Orario has to offer and her ultimate goal is to surpass the skills of the gods themselves but she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
** She is the best Orario has to offer and her ultimate goal is to surpass the skills of the gods themselves but she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
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* Ultimate.Blacksmith: The best (mortal) smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario. She is the best Orario has to offer and her ultimate goal is to surpass the skills of the gods themselves.
** But she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
** But she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
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* Ultimate.Ultimate Blacksmith: The best (mortal) smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario. She is the best Orario has to offer and her ultimate goal is to surpass the skills of the gods themselves.
** Butthemselves but she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
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* Ultimate.Blacksmith: The best (mortal) smith in the largest guild dedicated to smithing in Orario. She is the best Orario has to offer and her ultimate goal is to surpass the skills of the gods themselves.
** But she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
** But she is completely taken aback when Sora completely rejects her services as his personal blacksmith, since he already possesses weapons, items and equipment with capabilities beyond anything she has created.
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* GreenEyedMonster: She's envious of Welf because he is in a party with Sora.
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* GreenEyedMonster: She's She is envious of Welf because he she is in at a party with Sora.Sora, since she believes that a blacksmith with less experience than her managed to obtain exclusive access to materials from an adventurer who has a skill that allows him to easily obtain rare materials that allow creation of powerful magic items.
