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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
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#42927: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:15:55 PM

[tup] Aziel the NTR antag.

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
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#42928: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:16:06 PM

  • Desperation (2006): Tak is a demonic entity who spreads death wherever he goes. Unearthed from the Desperation mining shaft and killing everybody inside, Tak slaughtered the entire town afterwards before going on a decades-long killing spree, which included destroying a bar in Vietnam that led to 87 deaths. Tak would eventually return to Desperation and possess the town’s sheriff Collie Entragian, using him to frame nearby travelers for marijuana possession and abuse them to his liking, even killing some for fun, including a little girl. With Daniel destined by God to stop him, Tak possesses his mother in an attempt to kill him and the rest of the escaped prisoners.
  • Civil War (2024):
    • The unnamed soldier is the ultra-patriotic leader of a tiny militia who proves himself to be the worst the civil war has to offer despite having no affiliation with either side of the conflict. Taking hostage those who pass by his base, the soldier kills people he deems non-American, dumping their bodies into a massive grave that houses the corpses of dozens, including children.

Edited by therealjackieboy on Apr 28th 2024 at 3:17:31 AM

"No running in the halls!"
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#42929: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:27:04 PM

Sure to Aziel.

Is it Desperation or Stephen King's Desperation?

And I'm changing ultra-patriotic to fanatically patriotic.

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pronounced 'Scraggle'
#42930: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:45:49 PM

Yes to Aziel.

Okay, I'm gonna start kicking off my Red Dead posts that Ravok introduced us to, starting with my half of Revolver's Big Bad Duumvirate...

What has Governor Griffon done?

  • Governor Griffon is the Small-Town Tyrant of Brimstone, a man who got rich through a heartless betrayal. Years ago, when Griffon's best friend and partner Nate—the father of our gunslinger protagonist, Red—found a vein of gold ore that ran through Bear Mountain, Nate proposed that he and Griffon would share equally in the profits. Instead, Griffon heartlessly betrayed Nate to the aforementioned General Diego, and had Diego hire men to kill Nate, his wife, and his son. Red made it out. His parents don't.
  • Griffon bankrolls and covers up Diego's mining operation, so he in turn can profit off of all the bloody slave labor Diego employs to mine the gold. The other thing with the gold mine is that Bear Mountain happens to be the sacred territory of the native Red Wolf tribe. No problem for Griffon, though; he and Diego arm their rivals, the Black Wolf tribe, and kick off a full war between the two tribes, resulting in the Red Wolf tribe being driven off their own territory and almost exterminated.
  • Enriching himself to the point he's slimed his way into becoming the Governor of Brimstone by the time Red comes for revenge, Griffon rules the town with an iron fist:
    • He bribes businessmen and landowners such as the banker Mr. Peabody and the rancher Annie Stokes into turning over their land—in exchange for "a crumb of the pie" at best—while having anyone he can't buy off murdered.
    • He employs psychos for hire who collect Native scalps, and specifically pays them to slaughter anyone who gets on his bad side
    • He sets up an annual Quick Draw competition called the "Battle Royale" which he's been rigging for the past five years in favor of his champion gunslinger Mr. Kelley, duping any would-be rivals to his regime into signing up and getting themselves killed
    • He has a nasty reputation for murdering people for slights; in one case attested to in Sheriff Bartlett's journal, he murdered a barber for nicking him
  • After having failed to dispose of Red through his various psychos and even the Battle Royale, Griffon and Red have a final draw, where Griffon cruelly brings up the death of Red's parents: "I always regretted what happened on your daddy's farm, Red. I should have been there...to make sure you joined them!" And unfortunately—for him—Red outdraws him and shoots the bastard dead.
Any mitigating factors?
  • Zilch. The closest he ever gets is offering Red a chance to walk away near the end—"ain't no shame in cheating death twice!—" but that's the Dirty Coward coming out. Dude is obviously terrified when he says this, and at this point he has every right to be (considering Red has killed his way through Griffon's mooks, Mr. Kelley, even his freaking secretary). Either way it's a moot point when Griffon decides to spend his last few minutes mocking Red for the murder of his parents.
Heinous standard?
  • As Ravok said, Griffon wouldn't make it in the continuity of Red Dead Redemption and its sequel, but as Revolver is under Canon Discontinuity, we're absolutely fine to measure him by the game's own terms. His original writeup utterly undersold what Griffon got up to, from financing and setting up Diego's entire slave labor operation, to inciting a genocidal war between Native tribes, to all the various little cruelties he racks up while running Brimstone like a tinpot dictator. He's totally fine to go back up.

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#42933: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:50:12 PM

[tup] Griffon

[up][up][up][up] It's weird. The movie's IMDb page lists it as the former, while the poster and movie itself lists it as the latter

Edited by therealjackieboy on Apr 28th 2024 at 3:50:25 AM

"No running in the halls!"
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#42934: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:55:30 PM

[tup] to Aziel and Governor Griffon.

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Goku Black
#42935: Apr 28th 2024 at 3:55:41 PM

[tup]griffin and azel

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#42936: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:01:31 PM

And a hearty yes to Griffon

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#42937: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:01:32 PM

Yes to Griffon. Before or after Diego? I'm leaning before, since they seem about equal status, while Griffon's more personal.

As for Desperation, I'll just do:

Edited by ACW on Apr 28th 2024 at 7:04:45 AM

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#42938: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:05:25 PM

[tup] for Aziel and Griffon.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#42939: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:06:40 PM

Also, geeze, a genocidal war wouldn't be enough in Redemption? Wow.

Edited by ACW on Apr 28th 2024 at 7:06:47 AM

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Just a starting content creator
#42940: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:08:16 PM

Yes to Governor Bird-Lion.

Edited by AmateurStorytime on Apr 28th 2024 at 4:08:47 AM

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#42941: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:09:43 PM

[tup] for Aziel and Governor Griffon.

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
Starkrafty pronounced 'Scraggle' (Pentatroper)
pronounced 'Scraggle'
#42943: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:28:57 PM

And okay, one more fun one from Revolver. The player is offered various bounties on no-gooders stirring up trouble in the West, and one of these guys is particularly horrifying...

What has Mr. N. Black done?

  • Mr. Black is the odd, creepy undertaker of the town of Tarnation, which used to be a somewhat lively frontier town until the sheriff died and it slowly turned into a Wretched Hive. Pretty soon, everyone in the city mysteriously and abruptly vanished ("All deliveries to Tarnation had been canceled, indefinitely! Apparently somebody by the name of Mr. Black is calling the shots up there these days. According to him, the good folks of Tarnation don't need food no more!") leaving only Mr. Black and a few nasty gangsters…
  • The nasty truth of the matter is, of course, Mr. Black wiped out everyone out—either they left or (and this mostly, given the enormous size of the town's graveyard) were murdered by Mr. Black and his gang. Mr. Black has a particularly insidious modus operandi: he buries people alive, waits until they die, unearths them to steal their valuables, then reburies them. Many bounty hunters have been sent to kill Mr. Black, and they too, "mysteriously" disappear to fill the graveyard's ranks…
  • When Red tracks down Mr. Black to kill him on charges of mass murder, all of Tarnation is a depopulated Ghost Town and the gravestones number in the multiple dozens. It's the cemetery where Mr. Black is fought, where he'll gleefully mow down his own mooks with a Gatling gun if they're in his way in his boss battle.
Any mitigating factors?
  • Nope. He's not hugely characterized or onscreen but he's a creepy sadist who, as Jebediah Cole notes (after foolishly trusting the burial of his sister to Mr. Black after she "mysteriously" passed away in Tarnation) is a little too eager about burying people alive.
Heinous standard?
  • The bounties in Red Dead Revolver are uniformly a nasty bunch—we have the Ugly Gang, who drove out the population of another town, killed at least a dozen people and do things like shoot dogs for giggles; or Professor Perry and his circus, who killed the previous leader of his circus, ten other workers, and then started doing shit like brainwashing dwarves into becoming evil clown assassins (yeah, I don't get it either)...
  • Mr. Black is well above this standard. The dude "mysteriously" killed the population of an entire town (and then some!) by burying them alive. The only characters in the entire game who exceed his body count are the Big Bad Duumvirate, who are well above him in terms of their resources and screentime.

Watch for the sign of the Saint — he will be back!
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#42945: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:30:21 PM

Seems like an easy enough yes for the different continuity.

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#42947: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:32:02 PM

Happy yes to Griffin and Mr. Black.

Thank you very much to everyone who voted for both quotes.

The Mad Cr0w: Thank you so much!

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Goku Black
#42948: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:34:30 PM

[tup]mr black

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#42949: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:37:59 PM

Yes to Mr. Black and the quotes there

Edited by Ravok on Apr 28th 2024 at 4:38:29 AM

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Starkrafty pronounced 'Scraggle' (Pentatroper)
pronounced 'Scraggle'
#42950: Apr 28th 2024 at 4:44:26 PM

And:

  • Late Night with the Devil: "Mr. Wriggles" is the nickname of the demon inhabiting the body of Lilly, a little girl who survived the mass suicide of a Satanic cult. When Lilly is brought on the late night talk show Night Owls as a ratings stunt, Mr. Wriggles quickly proves that Evil Is Not a Toy, subjecting the local phony psychic Christou to a horrifying death through Mind Rape and black bile oozing out of his every orifice. Afterward, "Mr. Wriggles" possesses Lilly so he can mock the host of Night Owls, Jack Delroy, over the death of his cancer-ridden wife. The history between Jack and "Mr. Wriggles" is darker and deeper than it initially appears; as part of a nebulous deal with the demon made for the sake of his career, Mr. Wriggles gave Jack's innocent wife terminal cancer. In the climax, Mr. Wriggles fully takes over Lilly, gruesomely massacres the remaining guests and staff, saving one particularly horrible death for an arrogant skeptic who tries to pledge himself to the demon as soon as he sees irrefutable proof of its existence. Finally, the demon tricks Jack into stabbing Lilly to death on live TV, giving him the "fame" Jack so desperately coveted.

Watch for the sign of the Saint — he will be back!

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