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See StealthPun for when the puns are hidden more covertly and {{Pun}} for a range of {{Pun}} subtropes. Also compare BattyBooks.
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See StealthPun for when the puns are hidden more covertly and {{Pun}} for a range of {{Pun}} subtropes. Also compare BattyBooks.
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* The ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' series is littered with them, most captured at [[http://www.lspace.org/books/apf/ The Annotated Pratchett File]]. Probably the first was in ''Discworld/TheLightFantastic'' about [[GrimReaper Death]], after being summoned by the Rite of [=AshkEnte=]:
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* The ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' series is littered with them, most captured at [[http://www.lspace.org/books/apf/ The Annotated Pratchett File]]. Probably the first was in ''Discworld/TheLightFantastic'' ''Literature/TheLightFantastic'' about [[GrimReaper Death]], after being summoned by the Rite of [=AshkEnte=]:
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** It was also used in combination with a ShoutOut in ''Discworld/SoulMusic'' which is about [[strike: Rock and Roll]] Music With Rocks In.
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** It was also used in combination with a ShoutOut in ''Discworld/SoulMusic'' ''Literature/SoulMusic'' which is about [[strike: Rock and Roll]] Music With Rocks In.
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** Used in ''Discworld/UnseenAcademicals'' for a double-barrelled pun (admittedly, the same one, but still):
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** Used in ''Discworld/UnseenAcademicals'' ''Literature/UnseenAcademicals'' for a double-barrelled pun (admittedly, the same one, but still):
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* "I think Lee acted alone", Tom said, feeling justly attacked.
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* "Glad I didn't get another text message requesting my credit card info today", Tom said, without context.
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* "I need to revive the cookware" Tom said, deadpan.
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* "I got the bomb to countdown again", Tom refused to say.
* "I got the bomb to countdown again", Tom refused to say.
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* "I need to revive the cookware" Tom said with a deadpan voice.
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* "I need to revive the cookware" Tom said with a deadpan voice.said, deadpan.
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-->"I have to go to the hardware store," he said wrenchingly.
-->"Would you like a soda," he asked spritely.
* Much of the plot of David Lubar's ''Literature/SleepingFreshmenNeverLie'' actually ''depends'' on Tom Swifties. As such, there are many scattered throughout the book.
-->"I have to go to the hardware store," he said wrenchingly.
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* Much of the plot of David Lubar's ''Literature/SleepingFreshmenNeverLie'' actually ''depends'' on Tom Swifties. As such, there are many scattered throughout the book.
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*Much of the plot of David Lubar's ''Literature/SleepingFreshmenNeverLie'' ''Literature/SleepingFreshmenNeverLie'': Much of the plot actually ''depends'' on Tom Swifties. As such, there are many scattered throughout the book. They're scattered throughout the book, though they're all made by Scott and other various characters purposefully after learning them in English class and finding them hilarious.
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* Mark Rosewater of ''MagicTheGathering'' held a Magic-related Tom Swifty contest a few years ago. The results can be seen [[http://www.wizards.com/magic/magazine/Article.aspx?x=mtgcom/daily/mr115 here.]] (All the way down - they will only make sense if you know the cards they're referencing, though.)
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* Mark Rosewater of ''MagicTheGathering'' ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' held a Magic-related Tom Swifty contest a few years ago. The results can be seen [[http://www.wizards.com/magic/magazine/Article.aspx?x=mtgcom/daily/mr115 here.]] (All the way down - they will only make sense if you know the cards they're referencing, though.)
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* "I'm trying to read Darwin's ''Voyage of the Beagle'', Tom said doggedly.
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* "I'm trying to read Darwin's ''Voyage of the Beagle'', Beagle''", Tom said doggedly.
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See StealthPun for when the puns are hidden more covertly and {{Pun}} for a range of {{Pun}} subtropes.
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See StealthPun for when the puns are hidden more covertly and {{Pun}} for a range of {{Pun}} subtropes.
subtropes. Also compare BattyBooks.
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* "Talking through this sieve makes me sound weird," Tom strained to say.
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* "I didn't do my math homework," said Tom, nonplussed.
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* "I can't believe I tore another pillow!", Tom said, feeling down.
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* "We're out of toothpaste," said Tom,Aim�lessly.Aim-lessly.
* "We're out of toothpaste," said Tom,
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* "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn," said Tom rhetorically [[note]]''GoneWithTheWind''[[/note]].
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* "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn," said Tom rhetorically [[note]]''GoneWithTheWind''[[/note]].[[note]]''Film/GoneWithTheWind''[[/note]].
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The name is a reference to the ''Literature/TomSwift'' series of books. They did not use the trope much themselves, rather the books and similar children's books of the time (''NancyDrew'', ''HardyBoys'' and other dialogue-heavy pint-sized detective novels) went to great lengths to avoid just repeating plain words like "said" and "tell" over and over again. So they employed many adverbs and alternatives: the Said-Bookism is deservedly [[SaidBookism its own trope.]] The Tom Swifty then arose later as an effective way of parodying this style [[BeamMeUpScotty until it became associated strongly with the original series itself.]]
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The name is a reference to the ''Literature/TomSwift'' series of books. They did not use the trope much themselves, rather the books and similar children's books of the time (''NancyDrew'', ''HardyBoys'' (''Literature/NancyDrew'', ''Literature/HardyBoys'' and other dialogue-heavy pint-sized detective novels) went to great lengths to avoid just repeating plain words like "said" and "tell" over and over again. So they employed many adverbs and alternatives: the Said-Bookism is deservedly [[SaidBookism its own trope.]] The Tom Swifty then arose later as an effective way of parodying this style [[BeamMeUpScotty until it became associated strongly with the original series itself.]]
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[[folder: I was at a party ]]
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* And from the ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'' parody "Farce Contact"...
-->"You're the Future Guy!" said Archer presciently.
-->"You're the Future Guy!" said Archer presciently.
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* From the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest (a competition for bad prose). This one is from Kimberly Baer, Woodbridge, VA in 2016.
-->"Nurse, I need more blankets, and my water pitcher is empty, and also my bedside lamp isn't working," Tom said coldly, dryly, and darkly, yet at the same time patiently.
-->"Nurse, I need more blankets, and my water pitcher is empty, and also my bedside lamp isn't working," Tom said coldly, dryly, and darkly, yet at the same time patiently.
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* "Fearless and Red are among my favorite albums," said Tom [[TaylorSwift Swiftly]].
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* "That martial artist looks a bit glum," Tom said [[BruceLee [[Creator/BruceLee sadly]].
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A TomSwifty (alternatively spelled TomSwiftie) is the use of the attribution of a quotation as a pun on some aspect of the content of the quotation. Less eloquently put, [[BuffySpeak it's a joke where the bit that says who said something and how they said it is a pun on what was said]]. Even more simply, it's a joke based on the SaidBookism used.
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A TomSwifty Tom Swifty (alternatively spelled TomSwiftie) Tom Swiftie) is the use of the attribution of a quotation as a pun on some aspect of the content of the quotation. Less eloquently put, [[BuffySpeak it's a joke where the bit that says who said something and how they said it is a pun on what was said]]. Even more simply, it's a joke based on the SaidBookism used.
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The name is a reference to the ''TomSwift'' series of books. They did not use the trope much themselves, rather the books and similar children's books of the time (''NancyDrew'', ''HardyBoys'' and other dialogue-heavy pint-sized detective novels) went to great lengths to avoid just repeating plain words like "said" and "tell" over and over again. So they employed many adverbs and alternatives: the Said-Bookism is deservedly [[SaidBookism its own trope.]] The TomSwifty then arose later as an effective way of parodying this style [[BeamMeUpScotty until it became associated strongly with the original series itself.]]
The exact point at which something is considered a TomSwifty and not something else varies. Some insist that it only counts as a TomSwifty when the pun is in the adverb, if the pun is in the verb it is often called a Croaker after the example ''"I might as well be dead," Tom croaked.''
The exact point at which something is considered a TomSwifty and not something else varies. Some insist that it only counts as a TomSwifty when the pun is in the adverb, if the pun is in the verb it is often called a Croaker after the example ''"I might as well be dead," Tom croaked.''
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The name is a reference to the ''TomSwift'' ''Literature/TomSwift'' series of books. They did not use the trope much themselves, rather the books and similar children's books of the time (''NancyDrew'', ''HardyBoys'' and other dialogue-heavy pint-sized detective novels) went to great lengths to avoid just repeating plain words like "said" and "tell" over and over again. So they employed many adverbs and alternatives: the Said-Bookism is deservedly [[SaidBookism its own trope.]] The TomSwifty Tom Swifty then arose later as an effective way of parodying this style [[BeamMeUpScotty until it became associated strongly with the original series itself.]]
The exact point at which something is considered aTomSwifty Tom Swifty and not something else varies. Some insist that it only counts as a TomSwifty Tom Swifty when the pun is in the adverb, if the pun is in the verb it is often called a Croaker after the example ''"I might as well be dead," Tom croaked.''
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* The New York Times [[http://schott.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/06/05/weekend-competition-tom-swifties/#comment-13201 held a contest]] for the top {{TomSwiftie}}s.
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* The New York Times [[http://schott.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/06/05/weekend-competition-tom-swifties/#comment-13201 held a contest]] for the top {{TomSwiftie}}s.Tom Swifties.
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* Creator/StephenKing mentions Swifties in his memoir/manual of style ''On Writing''. "When debating whether or not to make some pernicious dandelion of an adverb part of your dialogue attribution," he remarks, "I suggest you ask yourself if you really want to write the sort of prose that might wind up in a party game."
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* "For hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee!" Tom wailed [[note]]MobyDick[[/note]].[[note]]Literature/MobyDick[[/note]].