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* The tutorial introduces Relationship Stories by starting Yuuka's first story. Said story has Yuuka balancing Sensei's accounts and criticizing him for spending an exorbitant amount...on a gacha game. You read that right, a gacha game [[TakeThatAudience making fun of people who spend too much on gacha games]].
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* The tutorial introduces Relationship Stories by starting Yuuka's first story. Said story has Yuuka balancing Sensei's accounts and criticizing him for spending an exorbitant amount...on a gacha game. You read that right, right: a gacha game [[TakeThatAudience making fun of people who spend too much on gacha games]].
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* One of Nagisa's skills is to share out slices of rollcake with her squadmates to heal and buff them. For Mika, she instead shoves a whole rollcake in her mouth.
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* [[Manga/ACertainScientificRailgun Misaki Shokuhou's]] animations demonstrate just how AthleticallyChallenged she is. Unlike every other character in the game, even her fellow collaboration character Misaka, she has a poor running stance and whenever she stops running, she kneels over to catch her breath.
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** Then Hoshino gives the nickname of ''Faust'' to Hifumi as their so-called leader to her shock and dismay.
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* Akane, Karin, and Asuna manage to reunited with Neru after Toki tried to separate them using Eridu's moving walls. Toki asks them how they managed to navigate the maze, in which they respond that they simply followed Asuna as she wandered the maze, to the bafflement of Toki. Goes to show how absurdly lucky Asuna is.
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* Akane, Karin, and Asuna manage to reunited with Neru after Toki tried to separate them using Eridu's moving walls. Toki asks them how they managed to navigate the maze, in which they respond that they simply followed Asuna as she wandered the maze, to the bafflement of Toki. Goes to show how absurdly lucky Asuna is.is as usual.
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* Toki casually appearing in the C&C's welcome back party for Neru, just a few days after they tried killing each other. This doesn't get past Neru, yelling why someone who tried to kill her is celebrating her own ''party''! Meanwhile, the club members don't mind and treat Toki as their own immediately despite previously being their enemy and not knowing her much.
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* Toki with bandages casually appearing in the C&C's welcome back party for Neru, just a few days after they tried killing each other. This doesn't get past Neru, yelling why someone who tried to kill her is celebrating her own ''party''! Meanwhile, the club members don't mind and treat Toki as their own immediately despite previously being their enemy and not knowing her much.
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** Despite the club reaching their destination at last, the Hotsprings Development Department blows up their building and makes them fail the exam by losing their exam papers in the explosion no thanks to Nagisa's manipulations.
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* Upon reuniting with Hiyori, she realizes that Sensei and Saori (who shot Sensei) are here to rescue her together. Hiyori wastes no time speculating that Sensei has come to punish Arius Squad and drag her off to a secret torture chamber in the SCHALE building's basement. Who knows how this rumor has started or spread all the way to Arius.
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* Upon reuniting with Hiyori, she realizes that Sensei and Saori (who shot Sensei) are here to rescue her together. Hiyori wastes no time speculating that Sensei has come to punish Arius Squad and drag her off to a secret torture chamber in the SCHALE building's basement. Who knows how this rumor has started or spread all the way to Arius.Arius or it's something Hiyori thought about.
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* The tutorial introduces Relationship Stories by starting Yuuka's first story. Said story has Yuuka balancing Sensei's accounts and criticizing him for spending an exorbitant amount...on a gacha game. You read that right, a gacha game [[TakeThatAudience making fun of people who spend too much on gacha games]].
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* In one of the afterword episodes of ''Kivotos Halo Festival'', Sena admits to having a false preconception of the Remedial Knights and realizing she was wrong after working with the Remedial Knights during the Halo Festival. She then proceeds to list the rumors that caused her preconception, unknowingly listing the stranger traits of every member of the Remedial Knights ''accurately'', all the while Serina becomes increasingly nervous as Sena goes on:
--> '''Sena:''' I foolishly believed the rumors that when the leader of the Remedial Knights was involved in a case, the number of wounded would actually increase. People often whisper, "The leader breaks, so her knights heal..." But after seeing the work you do here, I simply cannot believe that a group so kind-hearted would be led by such barbarous tactics.
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--> '''Sena:''' I must admit, I've even heard of a Remedial Knights nurse who attempted to cure a sleeping disorder with the aid of a baseball bat and wolfsbane tea, worsening their conditions.
--> '''Serina:''' Ah...Ahaha... Yes... You know how facts can be distorted through the rumor mill...
--> '''Sena:''' I would agree. You've shown me today that rumors are simply rumors.
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--> '''Sena:''' Yes. They say there is a Remedial Knights nurse who appears whenever she is needed, like a medical ghost. They even go so far as to claim that this nurse provides aid to patients before they can even press the call button and then disappears as if she were never there.
--> '''Sena:''' I foolishly believed the rumors that when the leader of the Remedial Knights was involved in a case, the number of wounded would actually increase. People often whisper, "The leader breaks, so her knights heal..." But after seeing the work you do here, I simply cannot believe that a group so kind-hearted would be led by such barbarous tactics.
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--> '''Sena:''' I must admit, I've even heard of a Remedial Knights nurse who attempted to cure a sleeping disorder with the aid of a baseball bat and wolfsbane tea, worsening their conditions.
--> '''Serina:''' Ah...Ahaha... Yes... You know how facts can be distorted through the rumor mill...
--> '''Sena:''' I would agree. You've shown me today that rumors are simply rumors.
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--> '''Sena:''' Yes. They say there is a Remedial Knights nurse who appears whenever she is needed, like a medical ghost. They even go so far as to claim that this nurse provides aid to patients before they can even press the call button and then disappears as if she were never there.
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* Haruna's goal of Gourmet research often goes into weird territories from trying to cook Coq au Vin using grape juice and ''ethanol'' as a substitute for wine, cooking instant ramen with high end ingredients and tools to give it refinement, to trying to instill love into Macha chocolates to counteract its bitterness, and of course her several accounts of blowing up restaurants that didn't pass her grade.
** Haruna's New Year Alt's EX skill gives us a scene of her digging into a osechi, before being disappointed with the fried shrimp. She then slowly brings up a detonator. Her chibi presses it as the "Eat or Die" motto of the club fades until only ''DIE'' remains before the explosives on enemies denotates.
* Juri's sheer misfortune with cooking pretty much anything. Having her simply make orange juice causes severe food poisoning, stirring a pot will make the food taste off, and the numerous times she had creating living pancake monsters with one growing as large a building! Still, whenever she uses her EX skill, enemies are still drawn to the spot where she drops her Pan-Chan, which in turn poisons them.
** Haruna's New Year Alt's EX skill gives us a scene of her digging into a osechi, before being disappointed with the fried shrimp. She then slowly brings up a detonator. Her chibi presses it as the "Eat or Die" motto of the club fades until only ''DIE'' remains before the explosives on enemies denotates.
* Juri's sheer misfortune with cooking pretty much anything. Having her simply make orange juice causes severe food poisoning, stirring a pot will make the food taste off, and the numerous times she had creating living pancake monsters with one growing as large a building! Still, whenever she uses her EX skill, enemies are still drawn to the spot where she drops her Pan-Chan, which in turn poisons them.
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* Shiroko gives her Terror counterpart a welcoming gift to Kivotos: her blue bank robber's mask. They then discuss their hobby of bank robberies to a piano rendition of Unwelcome School called [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmPUPU8Nwqw Welcome School]], making for a jarring juxtaposition of heartwarming music being played to a discussion between potential criminals. As much as it's a [[HeartwarmingMoments touching moment]], it just goes to show that Shiroko will always be Shiroko, no matter the reality.
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* Shiroko gives her Terror counterpart a welcoming gift to Kivotos: her blue bank robber's mask. They then discuss their hobby of bank robberies to a piano rendition of Unwelcome School called [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmPUPU8Nwqw Welcome School]], making for a jarring juxtaposition of heartwarming music being played to a discussion between potential criminals. As much as it's a [[HeartwarmingMoments [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments touching moment]], it just goes to show that Shiroko will always be Shiroko, no matter the reality.
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* One of the final scenes of the Chapter has Sensei prepare the Make-Up Work Club room for a new group of students coming in...[[HereWeGoAgain only for the same four familiar students to return...with extremely similar reasons to when they had to arrive in the first time (this time with Azusa sharing Hifumi's excuse about neglecting her studies to see a Peroro live event)...Cue Sensei comedically fainting]].
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* The concept of ''Trinity's Extracurricular Activities'', for one the fact that Hanako managed to drag not only Koharu, but Hinata, and even Ui to adventure in a tropical deserted island, but also that when they go there they have to face against TheDreaded Justina Council, who for some reason are also wearing swimsuits.
